Florida Institute of Technology
High Tech with a Human Touch
Writing Style Guide
The following is a description of Florida Institute of Technology's in-house writing style for everything except technical papers and reports. This guide is set up alphabetically and contains listings that will allow you to standardize everything you write for the university. Reference materials include The Associated Press Stylebook, Webster's New Dictionary and McGraw-Hill Dictionary of Scientific and Technical Terms.
a, an
Use the article "a" before
consonant sounds (e.g., a catastrophe);
use "an" before
vowel sounds (e.g., an energy crisis,
an
honorable
man).
abbreviations
- Abbreviate Co., Corp., Inc. and Ltd. when used after the name of a corporate entity.
- With dates or numerals, abbreviate a.m., p.m., no. (number), A.D., B.C.
- In numbered addresses, abbreviate Ave., Blvd., Ste., Rte. and St., but spell out in text.
- Spell out United States as a noun, but abbreviate U.S. as an adjective.
academic
degrees
See also class year and academic degees
If mention of degrees is necessary to establish someone's credentials, the preferred form is to avoid an abbreviation and use instead a phrase such as John Jones, who has a doctorate in psychology.
Use an apostrophe in bachelor's degree and master's degree. Use abbreviations such as B.S., M.A., M.B.A., LL.D. and Ph.D. only when the need to identify many individuals by degree on first reference would make the preferred form cumbersome.
When used after a name, an academic abbreviation is set off by commas. (John Jones, Ph.D., spoke.)
Do not precede a name with a courtesy title for an academic degree and follow it with the abbreviation for the degree in the same reference.
If writing generically about master's- or bachelor's-degree programs, use lowercase. Initial cap only if you refer to a specific program (Master of Science in Engineering or Bachelor of Science in English).
academic
departments
It is preferred
to lowercase academic departments except
for words that are proper nouns or
adjectives: the department of chemistry,
the department of English, the chemistry
department, the English department.
In Florida Tech catalogs and other publications if necessary, the department will be initial cap on first reference only.
"Department of" is used with reference to academic units. "Office of" is used with reference to administrative units. (department of humanities and communication, Office of Creative Services)
academic
titles
Capitalize and
spell out formal titles such as Professor,
Chancellor, Chairman and Dean when
they precede a name. Lowercase elsewhere.
Lowercase modifiers such as history
Professor Robert White or department
Chairman Frank Thomas.
academic
years
Lowercase: the
freshman, sophomore, junior and senior
classes.
accept,
except
"Accept" means
to receive. "Except" means
to exclude.
acoustooptic
Spell
as one word, not acousto optic or acousto-optic.
acronyms
Define
all but the most common abbreviations
and
acronyms on first reference. Do
not use periods. Do not add an apostrophe
when forming a plural (PCs, VAXes,
IBMs).
addresses
- Use the abbreviations Ave., Blvd., Dr., Rd., Ste., Ter., Rte. and St. only with numbered addresses.
- Spell out when part of a formal street name given without a number or when included in text.
- Always use figures for an address number.
- Abbreviate compass points and omit periods with two-letter compass points.
- Do not abbreviate compass points if an address number is not given (East 42nd Street; 222 E. 42nd St., North Hollywood).
- Exception: On university forms and stationary, no abbreviations are used. (150 West University Boulevard, Melbourne, FL 32901-6975)
administration
Lowercase:
the administration, the president's administration.
adverbs
- Adverbs ending in "ly" that help form compound modifiers are never followed by hyphens (tightly written story).
- The adverb "well" is always followed by a hyphen in two-word combinations modifying nouns (well-written story, well-respected professor).
- If the modifier follows a form of the verb "to be", however, drop the hyphen (the author is well respected).
adviser
Not
advisor.
affect,
effect
Generally,
use "affect" as
a verb—its meaning is to influence.
(The game will affect the standings.)
Avoid using "affect" as
a noun.
Use "effect" as a noun—it means result. (The effect was overwhelming.) "Effect" as a verb means to cause. (He will effect many changes in the university.)
alumnus,
alumni, alumna, alumnae
Use
alumnus (alumni in the plural)
when referring
to a man who has attended a school.
Use alumna (alumnae in the plural)
for similar reference to a woman.
Use alumni when referring to a group
of men and women. Alumnus—one
who has attended or graduated from
a college or school.
among,
between
Generally, "between" introduces
two items and "among" introduces
more than two. (The bet is between
you and me. The workstations were
equally divided among Macintoshes,
IBMs and UNIX boxes.)
ampersand
Use
only when part of a formal name (Baltimore & Ohio
Railroad); use "and" in
all other instances.
annual
For
an event to be labeled annual, it must
have
taken place for at least two successive
years. Avoid the phrase, first
annual. Use inaugural instead.
apostrophe
- Use to indicate omitted letters and figures. (class of '79, the Spirit of '76, the '20s)
- Use to form plurals of single letters and possessives. (p's and q's, A's and B's)
- Do NOT use an apostrophe to form plurals of numerals or multiple-letter combinations. (the 1980s, PCs)
area
codes
Use
parentheses around the area code (321)
674-8000.
Do not use a 1 before an 800 number
(800) 432-3355.
as,
like
The
conjunction "as" is
the correct word to introduce clauses. "Like" is
used correctly as a preposition
to compare nouns and pronouns.
(John
does his job professionally, as
he should. John plays guitar like
a
pro.)
assistant,
associate
Never
abbreviate. Capitalize only when part
of a formal
title before a name. (Assistant
Professor John Smith)
audiocassette,
audiotape, audiovisual
One
word.
awhile,
a while
When
following a preposition use "a
while"; otherwise spell it as one
word.
bachelor
of arts, bachelor of science
A bachelor's degree
or bachelor's is acceptable. See capitalization.
because,
since
"Because" expresses
a cause-and-effect relationship. "Since" is
used for reference to time. (I finished
the assignment because I want a good
grade. I have been doing my homework
since 3 p.m.)
"Since" is acceptable in a casual sense when the first event in a sequence leads logically to the second, but is not its direct cause. (They went to the game, since they had been given tickets.)
beside,
besides
Beside means at
the side of. Besides means in addition
to. (She is sitting beside the plant.
He has other assignments besides his
English homework.)
between,
among
See among, between.
biannual,
biennial
Biannual means twice
a year or semiannual. Biennial means
every two years.
board of
directors, board of trustees
Always lowercase.
bullets
See lists (bulleted)
can,
may
Can—know,
understand; to be able to do, make, or
accomplish; to have knowledge or skill.
May—have power, am able; have the
ability to; have permission to.
capitalization
The
following rules apply:
- Initial cap all official names of College of..., School of..., Office of... (College of Aeronautics, School of Psychology, Office of the President, etc.). Lowercase registrar's office, president's office, board of trustees, board of directors.
- Initial cap Department of .... only on first reference in Florida Tech catalogs or other publications if necessary, otherwise lowercase.
- Initial cap Master and Bachelor only when writing about a specific degree (Master of Science in Engineering, Bachelor of Science in English).
- Lowercase university when it stands alone (Florida Tech is a leader among independent universities. The university spans 130 acres.) Initial cap only when it is used as a part of an official name (Ohio State University).
- Lowercase prepositions (about, before, between, through) in course titles for catalog.
captions
See photo captions.
catalog
Not catalogue (catalog,
cataloged, cataloging).
cents
Spell out and lowercase
using numerals for amounts less than
a dollar (5 cents, 12 cents).
chairman,
chairwoman
Use chair. Do not
use chairperson.
class year and academic degrees
When identifying individuals by class year and academic degree, punctuate as follows:
John Jones ’98 went to the lecture.
John Jones ’98, ’01, went to the lecture.
John Jones, Ph.D., went to the lecture.
John Jones ’98 M.S. went to the lecture.
John Jones ’98 M.S., ’01 Ph.D., went to the lecture.
classmate
One word.
classroom
One word.
co-
Does not follow
the rule of prefixes. Retain the hyphen
when forming nouns, adjectives and verbs
that indicate occupation or status (co-worker,
co-founder, co-author). No hyphen in
other combinations (cooperate, coexist,
coed, coordination).
coast
Lowercase when referring
to the physical shoreline (Atlantic coast,
east coast). Capitalize when referring
to region of the United States lying
along such shorelines (Atlantic Coast,
East Coast). Do not capitalize when referring
to smaller regions (the Virginia coast).
Capitalize when standing alone only if
the reference is to the West Coast.
College of Aeronautics – formerly School of Aeronautics
College of Business– formerly School of Management
College of Engineering
College of Psychology and Liberal Arts – formerly School of Psychology
College of Science– formerly College of Science and Liberal Arts
colon
- Use a colon at the end of a sentence to introduce lists, tabulations, texts, etc. (There are three types of exam questions: multiple choice, open-ended and essay.)
- Capitalize the first word after a colon only if it is a proper noun or the start of a complete sentence. (He promised this: The team will win first place in the competition.)
- Be especially careful not to use a colon between a verb and its complement or object, between a preposition and its object, or after such as. (NOT: John ate: ham and cheese. The cat is on: the chair. The trip included activities such as: biking, hiking and canoeing.)
commas
Commas
are used to:
- Set off words, phrases or clauses in a series. Do not place a comma before the conjunction in a series. (The colors on the American flag are red, white and blue.) Use a comma before the conjunction with items in a complex series. (I had orange juice, toast, and ham and eggs.)
- Set off a prepositional, adverbial or dependent clause that precedes, interrupts or follows an independent (main) clause in a sentence. (When she discovered the answer, she reported her findings to the committee. The report, after being read aloud, was put up for consideration.)
- Set off two independent (main) clauses in a single sentence joined by a conjunction (a compound sentence) and for short independent clauses not joined by a conjunction. (She knew little about him, and he volunteered nothing. I came, I saw, I conquered.)
- Set off contrasting and opposing expressions within a sentence. (He changed his style, not his ethics. The cost is $50, not $56.)
- Set off adjectives in a series that are equal in rank where the comma effectively replaces the word "and" (thoughtful, considerate manner; harsh, cold wind).
- Set off quotations. Note: If a quotation is used as the subject of a sentence or if it is not being presented as actual dialogue, a comma is not used. ("The computer is down" was the reply we all feared. The fact that he said he was "leaving this instant" doesn't mean he actually left.)
- Separate a question from the rest of a sentence. (It's a nice day, isn't it?)
- Indicate the omission of a word or words in a sentence. (Common stocks are preferred by some investors; bonds, by others.)
- Avoid ambiguity and to emphasize a particular phrase. (To John, Jane was someone special. The more bells and whistles a computer has, the higher the price.)
- Set off geographical names, dates and addresses from the rest of a sentence. (Melbourne, Fla., is on the East Coast. He was wounded Sunday, June 12, 1940, two days before he was to come home.) Note: When just the month and year are given, the comma is omitted. (She received her master's degree in May 1990.)
- Set off nonessential clauses with a comma following a conjunction in a compound sentence. (He likes his job at the university, but in a few months he will be graduating.)
-
Set off ages and hometowns from a name. (John Doe, 41, attended the event. Jane Doe, of Melbourne, Fla., also attended.)
-
Set off academic credentials from a name. (Jane Doe, Ph.D., is the professor.)
communications,
graphics, electronics, series, headquarters
These words are
both singular and plural in construction.
They do not violate the rule of plural
adjectives when modifying a plural noun.
The nouns that these words are modifying
determine the verb tense.
compared
to, compared with
Use "compared
to" when the intent is to assert,
without the need for elaboration, that
two or more items are similar. (Her
work was compared to that of Susan
B. Anthony's
campaign for women's suffrage.)
Use "compared with" when juxtaposing two or more items to illustrate similarities and/or differences. (His time was 2:11:10, compared with 2:14 for his closest competitor.)
compass
points
See addresses.
complement,
compliment
Complement is a
noun and verb denoting completeness or
the process of supplementing something.
(The department has a complement of 26
professors.)
Compliment is a noun or verb that denotes praise or the expression of courtesy. (The vice president complimented the entire teaching staff.)
compose,
comprise
Compose means to
create or put together. (He composed
a song.)
Comprise means to contain, to include all, or embrace. (The university is comprised of five basic units.)
composition titles
- Capitalize the principal words, including prepositions and conjunctions of four or more letters: "The Star Spangled Banner".
- Capitalize an article (the, a, an) or a word of fewer than four letters if it is the first or last word in a title: "Of Mice and Men".
- Italicize titles of newspapers, magazines and books (excluding reference works and the Bible). Underline if you can't set in italics.
- Put quotation marks around the titles of movies, TV programs, plays, epic poems, operas, albums, exhibit titles, works of art, articles, chapters, lectures, speeches and presentations.
compound
words
See hyphenation.
conjunctions
It is OK to begin
a sentence with a conjunction occasionally,
but do not set the conjunction off with
a comma. (And the ARL building contains
more research laboratories.)
course names
Lowercase reference
to subject matter, unless a proper noun
(mathematics, science, oceanography,
English)
course work
Two words, not one.
courtesy
titles
In general, (outside
of standard correspondence) do NOT use
the courtesy titles Miss, Mr., Mrs.,
Ms. on first and last names of people: Betty
Ford, Jimmy Carter in
regular copy.
credentials
Use
periods with most credentials and academic
degrees (B.S., M.S., M.B.A., Ed.S., J.D.,
Ph.D., etc.). List credentials only on first
reference and in captions.
database
One word as a noun
and adjective.
dates (also see months)
- When a phrase lists only a month and a year, do not separate the year with a comma (August 1990).
- In tabular form, use three-letter abbreviations without periods (Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, May, Jun, Jul, Aug, Sep, Oct, Nov, Dec).
- Always use Arabic figures, without st, nd, rd, or th. (The party will take place January 21. NOT: The party will take place January 21st.)
- It is unnecessary to indicate the year if the event occurs within the same year as the publication.
- Do not use "on" with dates when its absence would not lead to confusion. (The program ends December 15. NOT: The program ends on December 15.)
- Spell out numerical designations first through ninth and use numerals with letter suffixes for 10th and above. (the first semester, the 10th anniversary)
days of
the week
Capitalize. Do not
abbreviate, except in tabular format
(Sun, Mon, Tue, Wed, Thu, Fri, Sat).
dean
Capitalize when
used as a formal title (Dean John Jones).
Lowercase in other uses (John Jones,
dean of the college; the dean).
dean's list
Lowercase in all
uses. (He is on the dean's list.)
decades
Use
Arabic figures to indicate decades of
history. Use an
apostrophe to indicate numerals that
are left out. Show plural by adding the
letter "s." (The 1980s, the
'90s, the Gay '90s, the 1920s, the mid-1950s.)
degrees
Use periods. (B.S.,
M.S., B.A., Ph.D., Ed.S., M.B.A., Psy.D.)
Also see temperature.
departments
See academic
departments.
desktop
One word.
dimensions
Use figures and
spell out inches, feet, yards, etc. to
indicate depth, height, width, length
and weight. Hyphenate adjectival forms
before nouns. (He is 6 feet 7 inches
tall, the 6-foot-7-inch man.)
directions
and regions
Lowercase north,
south, northeast, northern, etc. when
they indicate compass directions; capitalize
when these words designate regions. (He
sat on the east side of the stadium.
They came here from the Northeast. The
storm system that developed in the Midwest
is spreading eastward.)
distance
Use figures for
10 and above, spell out one through nine.
(He ran 10 miles. He kept his top speed
for only two miles.)
doctor
In text, use Dr.
on first reference as a formal title
before the name of an individual who
holds a doctoral degree. The form Dr.,
or Drs., in a plural construction, applies
to all first-reference uses before a
name, including direct quotations. On
second reference, use only the last name.
dorm/dormitory
Use residence hall
instead.
drop out
(v.), dropout (n.)
(He will drop out
of the English class. He will become
a second-semester dropout.)
due to,
because of
"Due
to" is
an adjectival prepositional phrase, meaning
it modifies a noun. It is commonly preceded
by a form of the verb "to be" (be,
is, are, was, were, etc.). Because it
follows a "be" verb, it is
considered a subject complement: It modifies
the subject of the sentence. (The team's
loss was due to an incorrect answer.
My financial success is due to wise investment
decisions.)
"Because of" is an adverbial prepositional phrase, meaning it modifies a verb. It usually answers the question, "Why?" (The team lost because of an incorrect answer. I am financially successful because of wise investment decisions.)
each
other, one another
Two people look
at each other. More than two look at
one another.
earth
Generally lowercase,
but capitalize when used as the proper
name of the planet. The one exception
being earth station, which is to remain
lowercase.
effect,
affect
See affect.
e.g.
Means for example
(i.e., that is).
either...or,
neither...nor
The nouns that follow
these words do not constitute a compound
subject; they are alternate subjects
and require a verb that agrees with the
nearest subject. (Either the dress is
red or it is not. Neither he nor they
are going.)
electrooptic
NOT electro optic.
ellipsis
Use three dots (no
spaces between them, but a space on each
side) to signify that something has been
left out of a direct quote or that the
writer is leaping from one topic to another.
e-mail
Lowercase e, hyphen
and lowercase mail. Unless as the first
word of a sentence or listing, then use
E-mail
em dash, en dash
- Do not leave a space before or after an em dash or en dash.
- An em dash is used to denote an abrupt change in thought in a sentence or an emphatic pause (We will fly to Paris in June—if I get a raise).
- An em dash can also be used when a phrase that otherwise would be set off by commas contains a series of words that must be separated by commas (He listed the qualities—intelligence, humor, conservatism, independence that he liked in an executive).
- An en dash can be used when separating years (1990–'95).
- Use an en dash between capitalized names and to indicate linkages, such as boundaries, treaties or oppositions. (Chicago–Memphis train, the Dempsey–Tunney fight.)
emeritus,
emeriti, emerita, emitae
This word often
is added to formal titles to denote individuals
who have retired but retain their rank
or title. When used, place emeritus after
the formal title, in keeping with the
general practice of academic institutions.
(Professor Emeritus John Johnson or John
Johnson, professor emeritus of history)
When referring to two or more individuals,
use professors emeriti.
ensure,
insure
Ensure means to
guarantee. Use insure when referring
to insurance.
entitle
Use to mean a right
to do or have something. Do not use to
mean titled.
essential
clauses, nonessential clauses
The
essential clause cannot be eliminated
without changing
the meaning of the sentence. The essential
clause must not be set off from the rest
of the sentence by commas. "That" is
the preferred pronoun to introduce clauses
that refer to an inanimate object.
The nonessential clause, however, can be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence. The nonessential clause must be set off from the rest of the sentence by commas. "Which" is the only acceptable pronoun to introduce a nonessential clause that refers to an inanimate object or an animal without a name.
et al
No periods.
etc.
Literal
translation is "and other things." Use "and
others," "and so forth" or "and
so on" in copy. Don't use any of
these, however, in a series that begins
with "for example." In this
case, etc. is appropriate. Lists introduced
with "such as" or "including" don't
need etc. because it's assumed there
are other items besides those listed.
every one,
everyone
Two words when it
means each individual item. One word
when used as a pronoun meaning all persons.
Everyone takes singular verbs and pronouns.
(Every one on the team was a winner.
Everyone wants his life to be happy.)
except
See accept.
faculty
When
used alone, treat as a singular noun.
(Our faculty
is the best. The faculty is attending
the conference.) When referring to the
people who make up the faculty, use "faculty
members."
farther,
further
Farther refers to
physical distance. Further refers to
an extension of time or degree.
Fellow
Capitalize.
fewer, less
"Fewer" is
used with individuals or individual items; "less" with
quantity or bulk. (Fewer users on the
network require less cable.)
fiber optics (n.), fiber-optic (compound modifier)
figures
Add "s" for
plurals; not apostrophe followed by "s," which
is possessive (1990s, 1990's lifestyle).
financial
aid
Lowercase except
in Florida Tech Financial Aid.
F.I.T.
The university will
no longer use F.I.T.; instead use Florida
Tech.
flier, flyer
Flier is the preferred
term for an aviator or an advertising
poster or handbill. Flyer is the proper
name of some trains and buses (The Western
Flyer).
Florida
Institute of Technology
This is the official
name of the university. Use full name
for first reference, then use Florida
Tech.
forward
NOT forwards.
fractions
Spell out amounts
less than one in stories, using hyphens
between words (two-thirds, four-fifths,
etc.).
fuel cell
Two words.
full time
(n.), full-time (compound modifier)
(She is a full-time
engineering student. He also goes to
class full time.)
fundraising,
fundraiser
(Fundraising
is difficult. They planned a fundraising
event. A fundraiser was hired. This
event is a fundraiser for the radio
station.)
good,
well
Good is an adjective
that means something is as it should
be or is better than average. Generally
not used as an adverb.
Well, when used as an adjective, means suitable, proper, healthy. When used as an adverb, well means in a satisfactory manner or skillfully. (The boat runs well.)
government
Always lowercase,
unless part of an agency or committee
name; never abbreviate.
grant-in-aid, grants-in-aid
gray
Not grey for color.
group study
Two
words.
hands-on
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier. (Each class offers hands-on
experience.)
health care
(n.), health-care (compound modifier)
(Health care is
essential in this day and time. Today,
health-care specialists are very important.)
high-energy
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier.
high-level
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier. (This high-level decision will
affect us all.)
high-tech
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier, except in the proper name High
Tech Corridor.
homepage
One word.
honorary
degrees
All references to
honorary degrees should specify that
the degree was honorary.
hopefully
Means
in a hopeful manner. Do not use it to
mean "it
is hoped," "let us hope" or "we
hope." (It is hoped that we will
complete our work by June.)
however
Avoid
starting a sentence with "however" when
the meaning is nevertheless. "However" is
used correctly at the beginning of a
sentence when it means "in whatever
way" or "to whatever extent." (However
you advise him, he will do as he thinks
best.)
hydro, hyper
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen.
hyphenation
The
following definitions apply:
- Use between some prefixes and root words (co-author, pre-exist, noncontroversial). Consult prefix references in AP Stylebook for guidelines.
- Use in forming compound nouns, especially those containing prepositions (sister-in-law, attorney-at-law, good-for-nothing).
- Use with compound
modifiers—two or more words that
express a single concept that precede
a noun. The purpose for hyphenating
compound modifiers is to guide readers
easily through your wording and help
them distinguish the modifiers from
the nouns at a glance.
- Use a hyphen to link all words in a compound modifier, except the adverb "very" and all adverbs that end in "ly" (first-quarter report, very blue sky, full-time job, off-campus site).
- Also use when a compound modifier is formed using a number, a single letter and a noun (D-shaped connector, 3.5-inch column, 24-point type).
- When a compound modifier that would normally be hyphenated before a noun occurs after a form of the verb "to be," the hyphen usually must be retained to avoid confusion. (The professor is well-known. The class is second-rate.)
- Use when writing compound numbers between 21 and 99 when the first number ends in "ty" (thirty-four, one hundred and fifty-eight).
- In typeset copy, do not leave a hyphenated word from one page to another page or from one column to another column on the same page.
- Do not hyphenate words with fewer than six letters (e.g., often); one syllable words (e.g., drowned, shipped, named, through); contractions (e.g., doesn't); abbreviations (e.g., Ph.D., FDA, B.C.)
- Use hyphens, rather than slashes (/) when forming nontraditional compound words. (Andy Seminick-Les Hall Field, student-athletes)
i.e.
Means "that
is" and is normally followed
by a comma (e.g., for example).
in, into
In indicates location.
Into indicates motion. (The cord is
in the back of the machine. The cord
is then plugged into the back of the
machine.)
include,
comprise
Use "include" to
introduce a series when the items that
follow are only part of the total.
Use "comprise" when the
full list of individual elements is
given.
infrared
One word.
in-house
Hyphenated as
a compound modifier. (We are an in-house
publications office.)
initials
Use periods and
no space.
in order
to
Rarely
necessary, use "to" instead.
insure
See ensure.
inter,
intra
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen.
Internet
Initial cap.
italics
Use
italics to emphasize individual words in
text and to identify books, newspapers
and magazines (excluding reference works
and the Bible). TV shows, plays, movies,
song titles, paintings, poems and other
composition titles are set off in quotes;
not italics. If you can't set words in
italics, underline those words instead.
judgment
Not judgement.
jump lines
Not necessary to
have a jump line from one page to the
following page. However, it is necessary
to include a jump line when it is not
immediately apparent that the copy is
continuing on the next page.
junior,
senior
Abbreviate as Jr.
and Sr. only with full names of persons
or animals. Do not precede with a comma.
kilowatt-hours
Hyphenate as a noun.
Abbreviate kilowatt, kW. (Abbreviation
is preferred by most technical sources.)
know-how
Hyphenate as a noun.
like
Should
not be substituted for "as" (or
such as) when comparing two or more nouns.
(We use
programs like Lotus 1-2-3 and WordStar
means you used programs that were similar
to Lotus 1-2-3 and WordStar; you didn't
use Lotus 1-2-3 or WordStar. We used
programs such as Lotus 1-2-3 and WordStar
is correct if you actually used Lotus
1-2-3 and WordStar.)
lists (bulleted)
Bulleted
lists fall into the following three categories:
- Unbroken syntax;
no colon, no capitalization, no punctuation.
This is a simple sentence broken into
a list to emphasize the parts of a
series.
For example: A computer system consists of- a computer
- a display device
- one or more disk drives
- Typical lists;
main clause followed by a colon with
no capitalization or punctuation. For
example: WordStar allows you to do
any of the following word processing
tasks quickly and easily:
- editing
- printing
- writing
- Complex lists;
main clause followed by a colon, includes
punctuation. Items in this list are
complete sentences. The first word
of each item should be capitalized
and each item should end with the appropriate
punctuation.
For example: Here are a few things macros do for you:- They save you the trouble of changing your margin settings every time you want to type a list.
- They provide you with a way to display chapter numbers and titles, main headings and page numbers.
- They eliminate the need to count blank lines between one element and another.
lists (numbered)
This type of list
should be introduced by a main clause,
followed by a colon. The first word of
each item should be capitalized, and
each item should have appropriate ending
punctuation.
For example: Connecting your computer monitor is easy:
- Plug one end of the cable into the computer.
- Plug the other end of the cable into the monitor.
- Plug the power cord for the monitor into the back of the monitor.
- Plug the other end of the power cord into a grounded outlet.
lists (in
sentences)
Simple
lists of items in sentence form should
be separated
by commas (The color choices were red,
white and green) with no serial comma,
e.g., before the "and." However,
when the comma is necessary for clarity
or to avoid confusion, then use it. (The
color choices were blue and black, purple,
yellow, and green and orange.)
Complex lists of items in sentence form, i.e., lists that contain multiple words with conjunctions, begin with a colon and items are separated by semicolons. (The color choices are: green with aqua undertones; blue and black; crimson edging on gold; and purple.)
long distance,
long-distance
Always hyphenate
in reference to telephone calls. In other
uses, hyphenate only when used as a compound
modifier.
make
up (v.), makeup (n., adj.)
(He will make up
the test at a later date. This is a makeup
test for the class.)
man-hours
Use work-hours,
and hyphenate as a noun.
manpower
Use employees, workers,
work force if referring to a group of
people needed to accomplish tasks. Use
effort or force if referring to physical
power in the abstract.
may, can
See can, may.
marketplace
One word.
metric abbreviations
The
following rules should apply.
- Butt two or less lowercase letters against number (35mm, 1cm).
- Butt single uppercase letters against numbers (512K).
- Place one space between two (or more) uppercase letters, or one (or more) uppercase letter(s) and one lowercase letter, and numbers (6 MHz, 50 bps, 15 Hz).
mid
No hyphen with this
prefix unless a capitalized word follows
(mid-American, mid-'80s, midsemester,
midterm, midrange).
mini
The rules in prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen (miniseries,
minibus).
months
- Capitalize the names of months in all uses.
- When a month is used with a specific date, abbreviate only Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov. and Dec.
- Spell out when using alone, with a year alone or with a specific date when used as a headline.
- When a phrase lists only a month and year, do not separate the year with commas (January 1990).
- In tabular material, use these three-letter forms without a period: Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, May, Jun, Jul, Aug, Sep, Oct, Nov, Dec
more than,
over
See over.
most
Generally,
should not be used to mean "almost" in
written English to modify the adjectives
all, every and any; the pronouns all,
everyone, everything, everybody, anyone,
anything and anybody; and the adverbs
everywhere, anywhere and always. Most
as an adverb means to the greatest or
highest degree, to a very great degree
and almost.
multi
The rules in prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen (multiengine,
multimillion, multidisciplinary, multimedia).
nano
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general no hyphen (nanoscale,
nanomechanical, nanosecond)
neither...nor
See either...or.
non
The
rules of prefixes apply, but in general
no hyphen when
forming a compound that does not have
a special meaning and can be understood
if "not" is used before the
base word (nonlinear, nonabrasive). Use
a hyphen, however, before proper nouns
or in awkward combinations, such as non-nuclear.
Follow Webster's Ninth New Collegiate
Dictionary.
nonprofit
One word.
noon, midnight
Use without numeral
12 before. To avoid confusion, do NOT
use 12 a.m. or 12 p.m. in reference to
either noon or midnight.
numbers
- Always spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence unless the number is a year. (1976 was a good year. Seven students attended the event.)
- Spell out one through nine unless used in reference to dimensions, measurements, age, addresses, money, dates, percentages, speeds, weights, clock time (3:10, but three o'clock), or in tabular material.
- Use figures for 10 and above. (They had 10 dogs and four cats.)
- When large numbers must be spelled out, use a hyphen to connect a word ending in "ty" to another word; do NOT use commas between other separate words that are part of one number. (twenty, twenty-one, one hundred forty-five)
numerals
In general, spell out one through nine and first through ninth, use numerals for 10 and 10th and above. For more details, see the AP Stylebook.
off-campus,
on-campus
Hyphenate when used
as an adjective (off-campus housing,
on-campus activities), but not when used
as an adverb (he lives off campus, she
lives on campus).
offline,
online
One word.
OK, OK'd,
OK'ing, OKs
Do NOT use okay.
on board,
on-board
Two
words as an adverb; hyphenate as a
compound modifier.
Use "aboard" when referring
to getting on or onto a ship, plane,
boat, etc. Never onboard.
ongoing
One word.
on-site
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier and adverb. (On-site campus
activities will be taking place.)
on, upon
On shows position
or state of rest; upon stresses direction
or movement.
organizations
and institutions
Capitalize the full
names of organizations and institutions
(American Medical Association; The Boeing
Company; Harvard University; Sigma Delta
Chi).
Use lowercase for internal elements of an organization when they have names that are widely used generic terms (the board of directors of General Motors, the board of trustees of Columbia University).
over
Generally refers
to a spatial relationship. (The lantern
hangs over the table.)
Over can, at times, be used with numerals, but more than is usually a better choice of words. (There are more than 4,400 students enrolled at the university.
NOT: There are over 4,400 students enrolled.)
paperwork
One word.
parentheses
If a complete sentence
is contained within parentheses, the
first letter in that sentence is capitalized
and the punctuation is placed within
the closing parenthesis. If an incomplete
sentence is contained within parentheses,
the first letter is lowercase and the
punctuation is placed outside the closing
parenthesis.
part time
(n.), part-time (compound modifier)
(She works part
time. She is a part-time student.)
Pascal
Not an acronym. The programming language is named after a mathematician, Blaise Pascal.
percent
One word. Always
spell out in text, unless the text is
technical or a list.
playback
(n.), play back (v.)
(The video playback
will show the error. The music will be
played back.)
photo captions
Always identify individuals in a photo starting from the left. Spell out left, right and center. Avoid using abbreviations (L, R, C). Only use a period if the caption is a complete sentence.
Acceptable caption formats include:
- From left: John Jones, Sue Johns, John Doe
- ROTC cadets pictured from left, front row: John Jones, Sue Johns, Jane Doe; from left, back row: John Doe, Ben Smith, Pat Smith
- Members of the flight team are, from left, John Jones, Sue Johns and John Doe.
- John Jones (left) and John Doe enjoyed the event.
plural adjectives
The
words communications, graphics, electronics,
headquarters and
various others are to be considered
both plural and singular in construction.
Therefore, phrases such as communications
systems, graphics artists and electronics
firms do not violate the plural adjective
rule of grammar—using plural
adjectives to modify plural nouns.
possessive
nouns
Possessive
nouns ending in "s" take only a final
apostrophe, not an apostrophe followed
by a second "s." (students' thoughts—meaning
the thoughts of multiple students)
post-
Follow Webster's
Tenth New Collegiate Dictionary. Hyphenate
if not listed but, (postbacculaureate,
postbachelor, postcollegiate, postdate,
postdoctoral, postgraduate).
postcard
One word.
postpaid
One word as a compound
modifier.
preprofessional
pretax
One word.
principal,
principle
Principal is a noun
and adjective meaning someone or something
first in rank, authority, importance
or degree. Principle is a noun that means
a fundamental truth, law, doctrine or
motivating force.
professor
Never abbreviate.
Capitalize when used as a formal title
before a full name. (Professor John Jones)
programmable
Not programable.
questionnaire
Not questionaire.
quotation
marks
Periods and commas
always go within quotation marks. Semicolons,
colons and unusual punctuation go outside
quotation marks when they do not apply
to the quote. Use single marks in headlines.
ranges
The
correct form is $12 million to $14 million;
not $12
to $14 million. Ranges should be specified
using the preposition "to," not
a dash. In technical text, ranges are
specified with an en dash unless the
range starts with "from," then
use the preposition "to."
re
The rules of prefixes
apply. See AP Stylebook. Note: For many
words, the sense is the governing factor:
recover (regain); re-cover (cover again);
reform (improve); re-form (form again).
real time
(n.), real-time (compound modifier)
(Testing will be
done in real time. The entire campus
will be used as a real-time aerial sensing
test bed.)
real-world
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier.
recur, recurred,
recurring
NOT reoccur.
residence
halls
NOT dorms or dormitories.
right-hand
side
Avoid using hand
in such references. Right side is sufficient.
ROTC
Acceptable on first
reference for Reserve Officer Training
Corps. No periods.
school
Capitalize when
part of a proper name (School of Psychology,
School of Extended Studies).
scuba
Lowercased acronym
for self-contained underwater breathing
apparatus.
seasons
Lowercase spring,
summer, fall, winter and derivatives
such as springtime, unless part of a
formal name.
self
Always hyphenate
as a prefix.
semi
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen (semifinal,
semi-invalid).
setup (n.),
set up (v.)
(She will set up
for the meeting. The sting was a setup.)
shall, will
Use "shall" to
express determination. (We shall overcome.
You and he shall stay.)
Either "shall" or "will" can be used in first-person constructions that do not emphasize determination. (We shall hold a meeting. We will hold a meeting.)
For second- and third-person construction, use "will" unless determination is stressed. (You will like it. She will not be pleased.)
should,
would
Use "should" to
express an obligation. Use "would" to
express a customary action and to construct
a conditional past tense. (We should
help the needy. In the summer, we would
spend hours at the beach.)
shut off
(v.), shut-off (n.)
(She shut off the
light. He used the shut-off switch.)
Note: This style contradicts Webster's
Ninth New Collegiate Dictionary.
sign up
(v.), sign-up (n.)
(Please sign up
for the class. The sign-up table is in
the lobby.)
space shuttle
Two words, lowercase,
but capitalize as a proper name. (The
Space Shuttle Endeavor)
spaceship
One word.
spacewalk
One word.
start up
(v.), start-up (n.)
(He started up the
engine. The start-up company needed funding.)
state
Lowercase
in all "state
of" construction. (The state of
Florida)
state abbreviations
Use
postal abbreviations when writing a complete
address (150 W. University Blvd., Melbourne,
FL 32901). Use text abbreviations when
including a city and state in a paragraph
or bulleted list (Melbourne, Fla.). When
referring to a state alone, spell out
the full state name (Florida).
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student-faculty
ratio
Not faculty-student
ratio.
sub
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen.
telephone
numbers
Use
parentheses for area code (321) 674-8000
and (800)
888-4348. If extension numbers are given,
use 768-8000, ext. 6159. Do not use a "1" before
the area code.
temperature
Indicate the temperature
scale, Fahrenheit or Celsius, of the
measurement when discussing temperature.
There is no space between the degree
symbol and the scale abbreviation. (i.e.,
72?°F)
that, which,
who, whom (pronouns)
Use "who" and "whom" when
referring to people and to animals with
names. (John Jones is the man who helped
me.)
Use "that" and "which" in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without names. (The dog that bit you was his.)
their, there,
they're
"Their" is
a possessive pronoun. "There" is
an adverb indicating direction. It is
also used with a pronoun for impersonal
constructions in which the subject follows
the verb. (There is no food on the table.) "They're" is
a contraction for they are. (This is
their room. Put the disk over there.
They're here to learn about computers.)
three dimensional
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier. 3-D is acceptable. Never three-D.
times
- Use figures, except for noon and midnight, and a space between the time and a.m. or p.m. (7 a.m., 7:30 p.m.)
- Use a colon to separate hours from minutes. (11:30 a.m., noon, NOT: 12 noon)
- Separate spans of time with an en dash, no space between the times, or with the prepositions "from" and "to" (8–10 a.m., 8 a.m.–5p.m., from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m.) Do not combine use of an en dash with use of a preposition. (NOT: from 8 a.m.–4 p.m.)
- Omit minute placeholders for times on the hour. (i.e., 7 a.m., not 7:00 a.m.)
- Avoid redundancies such as 10 a.m. this morning. Instead, use 10 a.m. today.
- If a time span is during the same part of the day, use a.m. or p.m. only once. (i.e., 8–10 a.m., not 8 a.m.–10 a.m. or 4–6 p.m., not 4 p.m.–6 p.m.)
timesaving
One word as a modifier.
T-shirt
titles
Titles such as president,
vice president, treasurer, reporter,
editor, dean, professor should not be
capitalized after a name. If you must
place a title before a name, capitalize
only if it is a formal title. Do not
capitalize occupational descriptions.
Job titles are always lowercase when
they stand alone.
See also composition titles, courtesy titles.
toward
NOT towards.
trustee
Do
not capitalize even if used before a
name.
ultra
The rules of prefixes
apply, but in general, no hyphen (ultraviolet,
ultrasonic).
under way (adv.), underway (adj.)
United States,
U.S.
Always spell out
as a noun. Can be abbreviated as an adjective.
university
Lowercase when it
stands alone. Capitalize only when it
is used as a part of an official name.
upgrade,
upgradable
NOT upgradeable.
upon, on
"Upon" stresses
direction or movement, "on" shows
position or state of rest.
upward
NOT upwards.
USA
No periods.
usable
NOT useable.
utilize
This word, meaning use, is rarely needed. "Use" is usually sufficient.
versus
Abbreviate as vs.
in all uses.
Veterans
Affairs
No apostrophe. VA
can be used on second reference.
videocassette
One word.
videocassette
recorder
Two words. VCR is
acceptable on second reference.
videodisc,
videodisk
Use videodisc and
spell as one word.
video recorder
Two words.
videotape
One
word as a noun and verb.
Web
site
Two words. Initial
cap on Web, lowercase site in all instances.
When printing a Web address with the official Florida Tech domain name (www.fit.edu) the "www." needs to be placed before the actual address and the HyperText Transfer Protocol (http://) does not need to be printed in front of the address. For example, the Office of Creative Services' address would be www.fit.edu/upub, not fit.edu/upub or http://www.fit.edu/upub. Also, a forward slash (/) does not need to follow the address.
When printing a Web address using a Florida Tech sub-domain (i.e., cos.fit.edu), the HyperText Transfer Protocol (http://) is necessary before the sub-domain name. For example, http://cos.fit.edu. Again, a forward slash (/) does not need to follow the address.
See World Wide Web entry.
well
Hyphenate as a part
of a compound modifier (She is a well-dressed
student).
which, that
"Which" introduces
a nonessential clause and must be preceded
by a comma (a nonessential clause can
be eliminated without altering the basic
meaning of a sentence).
"That" introduces an essential clause (cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of a sentence; can stand alone and be a sentence) and is not preceded by a comma. (This is the best brochure that I have ever written. The new brochure is an exceptional piece, which will, no doubt, be a winner with the students.)
white-water
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier. (white-water rafting)
who, that
Use
the pronoun "who" for
references to human beings and animals
with names. Use the pronoun "that" to
refer to inanimate objects.
wide
No
hyphen needed with the suffix "wide." Some
examples are campuswide, nationwide,
worldwide, areawide, companywide, universitywide,
and so on.
widows
In typesetting,
a widow is defined as a single word of
seven or fewer letters or the last syllable
of a multisyllable word that appears
at the end of a graph or column of typeset
text or the beginning of a column. All
widows should be corrected, if possible.
work force
Two words.
work-study
World
Wide Web
Avoid if possible,
use Web page, Web site. Lowercase and
abbreviate (www) in addresses.
worthwhile
One word as an adjective.
X-ray (noun, verb and adjective)
year-end
Hyphenate as a compound
modifier.
years
Use
figures and months without commas: August
1990. Use an "s" without an
apostrophe to indicate spans of decades
or centuries: the 1990s. Use an apostrophe
for class years: She belonged to the
Class of '72.
ZIP code
Use all-caps ZIP for Zone Improvement Program, but always lowercase the word "code."